We are a Year 4 and 5 class at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Well done Carter. You've written a solid character description about your Nana. For BTB next time you could include a sentence talking about something your Nana often says to you. Good effort.
Fantistic character description of Nana Carter, love the bit about her skin and i laughed to myself for ages.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Well done Carter. You've written a solid character description about your Nana. For BTB next time you could include a sentence talking about something your Nana often says to you. Good effort.
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