We are a Year 4 and 5 class at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Tuesday, April 11, 2017
How to make a Mud Sandwich by Liam R
WALT: explain to the class how to make a mud sandwich.
I found it challenging to find images to go with my instructions.
I enjoyed making silly instructions.
Hi Liam I like the way you did not use put all the time. Like I did in my writing. Next time you could tall me where to put the mud and dirt. From Angus.
kia ora Liam
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have you used photos to show what the tools were.:)
To be BTB use stronger verbs and more detail.
From Lucy and Jacob
hi liam i likd the way you did steps
DeleteHi Liam I like the way you did not use put all the time. Like I did in my writing. Next time you could tall me where to put the mud and dirt. From Angus.
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