We are a Year 4 and 5 class at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Well done Tulsi, I especially like your similes about how he looks. For BTB next time make sure the pronoun 'I' is a capital and your have used capitals for proper nouns.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Well done Tulsi, I especially like your similes about how he looks. For BTB next time make sure the pronoun 'I' is a capital and your have used capitals for proper nouns.
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