We are a Year 4 and 5 class at Paroa School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
kia ora LiamI like the way you have you used photos to show what the tools were.:)To be BTB use stronger verbs and more detail.From Lucy and Jacob
hi liam i likd the way you did steps
Hi Liam I like the way you did not use put all the time. Like I did in my writing. Next time you could tall me where to put the mud and dirt. From Angus.
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.