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Tuesday, April 11, 2017

How to make a Mud Sandwich by Liam R

WALT: explain to the class how to make a mud sandwich. I found it challenging to find images to go with my instructions. I enjoyed making silly instructions.


  1. kia ora Liam
    I like the way you have you used photos to show what the tools were.:)
    To be BTB use stronger verbs and more detail.
    From Lucy and Jacob

  2. Hi Liam I like the way you did not use put all the time. Like I did in my writing. Next time you could tall me where to put the mud and dirt. From Angus.


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